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The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. rx3N
The pie chart presents information on the share of production of passenger cars around continents and geographical regions in 2015. Firstly, Greater China, hence a single country, accounts for more than ¼ of the total production of cars, which is a significant portion given that the other sectors of the pie include entire continents and economics regions. Overall China, Japan and South Korea with their joint 16% of production and the 8% coming from South Asia would result in 50% of world passenger car production, half the pie for the Asian continent. On the other hand, Europe establishes itself as the second major producer with 25% of world manufacturing, slightly below China. North America with the US, Canada and Mexico would account for 19%, the third largest slice of the pie chart.
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chart presents information on the share of
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of passenger cars around continents and geographical regions in 2015.

Firstly
, Greater China,
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a single country, accounts for more than ¼ of the total
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production
of cars, which is a significant portion
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that the other sectors of the
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include entire continents and economics regions.
Overall
China, Japan and South Korea with their joint 16% of
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production
and the 8% coming from South Asia would result in 50% of world passenger car
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, half the
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for the Asian continent.

On the other hand
, Europe establishes itself as the second major producer with 25% of world manufacturing,
slightly
below China. North America with the US, Canada and Mexico would account for 19%, the third largest slice of the
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chart.
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