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The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now,and plans for its development

The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development 3KVX
The first map reveals the present picture of the Islip town centre, whereas second map represent it's development planning. At a first glance, countryside civil removed in new planning model which is now situated in north side of the picture, while shops position remained same and the main road will converted into the pedestrian path. on the upper side of it planner think to provide the facilities of bus station, shoping complex and cark parking which will be near to the new housing. Noticeable, all the development pattern make in ring shape and the road which is only constructed at school point, now reached to whole accomodation patterns. Interestingly, the place of school remained same. Besides it, the area of the park will be decrease to some extent and it will situated under south east corner. Overall, in new model of Islip town variety of facilities will be added that leads to its development.
The
first
map reveals the present picture of the
Islip
town
centre
, whereas second map represent
it's
development planning. At a
first
glance, countryside civil removed in new planning model which is
now
situated in north side of the picture, while shops position remained same and the main road will
converted
into the pedestrian path.
on
the upper side of
it planner
think
to provide the facilities of bus station,
shoping
complex and
cark
parking which will be near to the new housing. Noticeable, all the development pattern
make
in ring shape and the road which is
only
constructed at school point,
now
reached to whole
accomodation
patterns.
Interestingly
, the place of school remained same.
Besides
it, the area of the park will be decrease to
some
extent and it will
situated
under
south east
corner.
Overall
, in new model of
Islip
town variety of facilities will be
added
that leads to its development.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the centre of a small town called islip as it is now, and plans for its development

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