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The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015. myY1

The bar chart gives us information about passenger's cars production worldwide during the year 2015. According to the data, it seems evident which are the two greater productor countries, with a slight difference: Greater China and Europe, with percentages of 26% and 25% respectively. By contrast, Middle East and Africa are the countries with the lowest amount of productions: 2% and 4% respectively.

The bar chart gives us information about passenger's cars production worldwide during the year 2015.

According to the data, it seems evident which are the two greater Possible spelling mistake found.product or
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 countries, with a slight difference: Greater China and Europe, with percentages of 26% and 25% respectively
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By contrast, Middle East and Africa are the countries with the lowest amount of productions: 2% and 4% respectively
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IELTS academic The graph shows data on the manufacture of passenger cars in 2015.

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American English

3 paragraphs

63 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

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Lexical Resource: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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