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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. To what extent do you agree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

: Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited. JgNw
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of men by group of their income and where they were born - in Australia or foreign countries. Overall, Australian - born men has a higher level of income compare to men born overseas. Men born in Australia were distributed by income with these figures - less than 15% with low income (less than $300 per week), 30% of them has lower middle income ($300-$600), 35% and 20% are belong to group with middle ($600-$1000) and high income (more than $100). Distribution of men born overseas reflects fact that they has got a lower income, group with low and lower income has higher percentage than men born in Australia. For example, it is more than 20% compare to less 15% in another group. The highest difference of income can be seen in middle income group, it is more than 15% between two groups of men.
The bar chart illustrates the proportions of
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and where they
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in Australia or foreign countries.

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, Australian
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born
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men
has a higher level of
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income
compare to
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men
born overseas.

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born in Australia
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income
with these figures
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less than 15% with low
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income
(less than $300 per week), 30% of them has lower middle
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income
($300-$600), 35% and 20% are
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with middle ($600-$1000) and high
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income
(more than $100).

Distribution of
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men
born overseas reflects fact that they
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a lower
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,
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with low and lower
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income
has higher percentage than
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men
born in Australia.
For example
, it is more than 20% compare to less 15% in another
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group
. The highest difference of
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can be
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, it is more than 15% between two
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IELTS academic : Genetic engineering is a dangerous trend. It should be limited.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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