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The graph shows daily new confirmed Covid-19 cases. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where

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The number of new Covid-19 cases in India began at 0 cases on March 1, 2020 but then increased significantly to approximately 100, 000 cases in October, 2020. However, it dropped considerably to around 10, 000 cases per day on February 24, 2021 and continued to reach a peak at over 300, 000 cases per day at the end of the period. Followed by Covid-19 cases in the United States began at 0 cases and climbed gradually to around 60, 000 cases on August 8, 2020. After 3 months, there was a considerable jump to 250, 000 cases, which was the highest second point in February, 2020. Finally it decreased noticeably and fluctuated around 60, 000 cases on April 25, 2021. On the other hand, the figures for France, Germany, Canada and the United Kingdom all began at 0 cases per day for the first time. But cases in France rose gradually to around 50, 000 after 8 months and had a steady fall to 45, 000 cases in April 2021. Germany’s cases increased slightly and continued to remain stable to 30, 000 cases per day until the end. The amount of Covid-19 cases confirmed by Canada and the United Kingdom experienced a growth to over 10, 000 cases and 50, 000 cases in January, 2021, it then decreased significantly to about 9, 000 cases and 2, 000 cases, respectively.
The number of new Covid-19 cases in India began at 0 cases on March 1,
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2020
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then increased
significantly
to approximately 100, 000 cases in
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October, 2020
.
However
, it dropped
considerably
to
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around
10, 000 cases per day on February 24,
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2021
and continued to reach a peak at over 300, 000 cases per day at the
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end
of the period. Followed by Covid-19 cases in the United States began at 0 cases and climbed
gradually
to
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around
60, 000 cases on August 8, 2020. After 3 months, there was a considerable jump to 250, 000 cases, which was the highest second point in
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "February 2020".
February, 2020
.
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Finally
it decreased
noticeably
and fluctuated
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around
60, 000 cases on April 25, 2021.

On the other hand
, the figures for France, Germany, Canada and the United Kingdom all began at 0 cases per day for the
first
time.
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But
cases in France rose
gradually
to
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around
50, 000 after 8 months and had a steady fall to 45, 000 cases in April 2021. Germany’s cases increased
slightly
and
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continued to remain
stable to 30, 000 cases per day until the
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end
. The amount of Covid-19 cases confirmed by Canada and the United Kingdom experienced a growth to over 10, 000 cases and 50, 000 cases in
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "January 2021".
January, 2021
, it then decreased
significantly
to about 9, 000 cases and 2, 000 cases,
respectively
.
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