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Leather goods production cycle.

Leather goods production cycle. nX5ER
The given picture illustrates the process through which animal skin is used to produce leather goods. Overall, the production cycle of leather goods consists of approximately 10 stages. It begins with the drying of animal skin and ends with various final goods made of leather. In the first stage, animal skin is hanging on the rope in the open air and drying in the sun. Then, dried animal skin was transferred by the logistic company to the factory. After arrival at the factory, animal skin is washed in water mixed with lime. Next, this process skin starts to soak in lime. Afterwards, animals' skin was smothered in a flattening machine. In the next stage, before polishing the animal skin by roller, animal skin soaks again in tannin with water and vegetable matter. In the following step, polished skin is transported to another factory, where leather goods like shoes, bags and shirts are made.
The
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given
picture illustrates the process through which
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animal
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skin
is
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used
to produce leather
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goods
.

Overall
, the production cycle of leather
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goods
consists of approximately 10 stages. It
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begins
with the drying of
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animal
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skin
and ends with various final
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goods
made of leather.

In the
first
stage,
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animal
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skin
is hanging on the rope in the open air and drying in the sun. Then, dried
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animal
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skin
was transferred
by the logistic
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company
to the factory. After arrival at the factory,
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animal
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skin
is washed
in water mixed with lime.
Next
, this process
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skin
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starts
to soak in lime. Afterwards, animals'
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skin
was smothered
in a flattening machine. In the
next
stage,
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before
polishing the
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animal
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skin
by roller,
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animal
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skin
soaks again in tannin with water and vegetable matter. In the following step, polished
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skin
is transported
to another factory, where leather
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goods
like shoes, bags and shirts
are made
.
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IELTS academic Leather goods production cycle.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
153 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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