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The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. wk8N
The line graph provides data on the yearly average expenses on cell phone and residential phone services from 2001 to 2010. Overall, the average expenditure for mobile phones increased significantly over the ten-year period while residential phone services drastically declined. Both services had the same average cost during 2006. Although cell phone services started low at around $200 in 2001 while residential phones is at it's peak with almost $700. In the following period of 5 years, landline phone services gradually declined to around $600 while mobile phones steadily increased to just over $500. In the year 2006, cell phone services overtook residential phone and both services shared the same level of popularity among users. In the next four years, cell phones overshadowed landline phones as it continued to increase significantly while the former had constantly decreased. The cell phone services reached its highest point in 2010 at around $750 nearly four times its initial cost (even surpassing the landline phone's strong start) while residential phone services was at its lowest point just above $400.
The line graph provides data on the yearly average expenses on
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and
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services
from 2001 to 2010.

Overall
, the average expenditure for mobile
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phones
increased
significantly
over the ten-year period while
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residential
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phone
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services
drastically
declined. Both
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services
had the same average cost during 2006.

Although
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cell
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phone
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services
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started
low at around $200 in 2001 while
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residential
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phones
is at
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it's
peak with almost $700. In the following period of 5 years, landline
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phone
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services
gradually
declined to around $600 while mobile
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phones
steadily
increased to
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just
over $500.

In the year 2006,
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cell
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phone
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overtook
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residential
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phone
and both
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services
shared the same level of popularity among users.
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In
the
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four years,
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cell
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overshadowed landline
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phones
as it continued to increase
significantly
while the former had
constantly
decreased. The
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cell
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phone
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services
reached its highest point in 2010 at around $750
nearly
four times its initial cost (even surpassing the landline phone's strong
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start
) while
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residential
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phone
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was at its lowest point
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just
above $400.
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