Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

Studies show that criminals get low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is educating people in prison so they can get a job after leaving prison. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.3

Studies show that criminals get low level of education. Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is educating people in prison so they can get a job after leaving prison. v. 3 BpPm

Research has proven that lawbreaker receives a narrow degree of education. The most hold the opinion that the most suitable way to lower criminal offenses is by teaching those in jail the skills they need to acquire employment after their release. I agree with this notion to a certain extent. Firstly, a plethora of people are sent to prison due to crimes such as theft and joining gangs that participate in illegal activities. This is due to the fact they did not graduate from school, let alone college, to obtain the tools that they need to make money in an honesty. For instance, 2019 Statistics obtained from prison research revealed that 80% of criminal offenses are committed by uneducated individuals who have no other options to put food on their tables except by committing these acts. Therefore, educating these delinquents during the time that they spent locked up, paves the way for them to receive income without breaking the law. Overall, this leads to a reduction in illegal activities. However, let us not ignore the fact that some lawbreaker is well-educated. Which means that a lack of education does not drive the acts they commit, in fact, they are driven by hate. Although they have spent time in prison for their acts, their mentality remains the same, especially if they are part of a cult. In these situations, no amount of knowledge can prevent them from repeating their offences again. For example, people who are part of racist organizations like the KKK, will continue to kill black humans as they believe they are entitled to their cause. Undoubtedly, the application of teaching schemes in prisons will not uplift the burden of their crimes once their jail time is up. In conclusion, Although despite the numerous wrongdoers that would refrain from criminal acts, once they are released from captivity, if they were to be taught essential working skills, fewer already posses these skills and continue to cause havoc.

Research has proven that lawbreaker receives a narrow degree of education. The most hold the opinion that the most suitable way to lower criminal offenses is by teaching those in jail the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 they need to acquire employment after their release. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with this notion to a certain extent. Firstly
, a plethora of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpenitentiarylockupconfinementjail
prison
 due to crimes such as theft and joining gangs that participate in illegal activities. This is due to the fact they did not graduate from school, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 alone college, to obtain the tools that they need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 money in an honesty. For instance
, 2019 Statistics obtained from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpenitentiarylockupconfinementjail
prison
 research revealed that 80% of criminal offenses are committed
 by uneducated individuals who have no other options to put food on their tables except by committing these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovethingstepactionperformancedeed
acts
. Therefore
, educating these delinquents during the time that they spent locked up, paves the way for them to receive income without breaking the law.  Overall
, this leads to a reduction in illegal activities.  However
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 us not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :neglect
ignore
 the fact that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 lawbreaker is well-educated. Which means that a lack of education does not drive the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovethingstepactionperformancedeed
acts
 they commit, in fact, they are driven
 by hate. Although they have spent time in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpenitentiarylockupconfinementjail
prison
 for their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovethingstepactionperformancedeed
acts
, their mentality remains the same, especially
 if they are part of a cult. In these situations, no amount of knowledge can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 them from repeating their Possible spelling mistake. 'offences' is British English.offenses
offences
 again. For example
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who are part of racist organizations like the KKK, will continue to kill black humans as they believe they are entitled
 to their cause. Undoubtedly
, the application of teaching schemes in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpenitentiarylockupconfinementjail
prisons
 will not uplift the burden of their crimes once their jail time is up.  In conclusion
, Although despite the numerous wrongdoers that would refrain from criminal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmovethingstepactionperformancedeed
acts
, once they are released
 from captivity, if they were to be taught
 essential working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
, fewer already posses these This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 and continue to cause havoc. 