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The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the number of visitors to three London Museums between 2007 and 2012. 90mX
The bar chart provides information how many people visits the National Gallery, Victoria and Albert Museum and British Museum from 2007 to 2012. Overall, the highest peak of visitors was recorded in 2012 while the lowest numbers were registered in the years 2009 and 2010. Victoria and Albert Museum was the most popular in 2007 and 2008 with around 14 million visitors per year. However, the numbers declined in 2009 and reached its lowest in 2010 with only 8 million visitors. Although the numbers went up in the next two years, it still became the least favorite museum by the end of the period. The British Museum started strong in 2007 with around 12 million visitors annually, second to Victoria and Albert Museum. But it became the least favorite from 2008 to 2009 recording its lowest point at about 6 million. The numbers started to bounce back in 2010 and by 2012, it registered approximately 14 million visitors making it the second choice among the three museums. Lastly, the National Gallery was the least favorite at the beginning of the period starting with around 6 million visitors. Over the years, its numbers increased gradually and by 2012, it outraced both Victoria and Albert Museum and British Museum reaching its peak at approximately 16 million visitors in one year surpassing all the records during the given period of time.
The bar chart provides information how
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and British
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from 2007 to 2012.

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were registered
in the years 2009 and 2010.

Victoria and Albert
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was the most popular in 2007 and 2008 with around 14
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per
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However
, the
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declined in 2009 and reached its lowest in 2010 with
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8
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. Although the
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went up in the
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two years, it
still
became the least favorite
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by the
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end
of the period.

The British
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started
strong in 2007 with around 12
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, second to Victoria and Albert
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it became the least favorite from 2008 to 2009 recording its lowest point at about 6
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. The
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started
to bounce back in 2010 and by 2012, it registered approximately 14
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making it the second choice among the three museums.

Lastly
, the National Gallery was the least favorite at the beginning of the period starting with around 6
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million
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. Over the years, its
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increased
gradually
and by 2012, it outraced both Victoria and Albert
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and British
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reaching its peak at approximately 16
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in one
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surpassing all the records during the
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