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he diagram below shows the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

he diagram below shows the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor. EYDB

Show process give a detailed information about production of steam with the help of gas cooled nuclear reactor. Overall, it can be seen that the tool contains 2 mains part which are reactor and heat exchanger. To begin with, the reactor consist of pressure vessels, which covered by concrete radiation shielding. Inside of this vessel there are four graphite moderators which contains of uranium fuel elements. Each moderators attached to the two boron control rod and top of of this roads contain charge tubes for loading fuel elements. The process itself begin with the input of cool gas dust and it blown to reactor through to gas blower. The gas heated in certain degree due to nuclear reactor's inside system then, it is to flow back into heat via hot gas duct. At the same time water converted into steam which is power for turbo alternator. The cool water enter the reactor again, and start the cycle again.

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 about production of steam with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
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 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
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 cooled nuclear reactor.

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, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
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 that the tool contains 2 mains part which are reactor and heat exchanger.

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 with, the reactor consist of pressure vessels, which covered by concrete radiation shielding. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "Inside".Inside
Inside of
 this vessel there are four graphite moderators which contains of uranium fuel elements. 'Each', 'every', 'either' and 'neither' are used with singular. Did you mean "all"?All
Each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "moderator"?moderator
moderators
 attached to the two boron control rod and top Possible typo: you repeated a wordof
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 roads contain charge tubes for loading fuel elements.

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begin
 with the input of cool You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
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 dust and it Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean "blew", "blowed"?blewblowed
blown
 to reactor through to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
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 blower. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
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 heated in certain degree due to nuclear reactor's inside system then, it is to flow back into heat via hot You use this word too often, consider replacing it withvaporsmoke
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 duct. At the same time water converted into steam which is power for turbo alternator. The cool water enter the reactor again, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 the cycle again. 