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he diagram below shows the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

he diagram below shows the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor. EYDB
Show process give a detailed information about production of steam with the help of gas cooled nuclear reactor. Overall, it can be seen that the tool contains 2 mains part which are reactor and heat exchanger. To begin with, the reactor consist of pressure vessels, which covered by concrete radiation shielding. Inside of this vessel there are four graphite moderators which contains of uranium fuel elements. Each moderators attached to the two boron control rod and top of of this roads contain charge tubes for loading fuel elements. The process itself begin with the input of cool gas dust and it blown to reactor through to gas blower. The gas heated in certain degree due to nuclear reactor's inside system then, it is to flow back into heat via hot gas duct. At the same time water converted into steam which is power for turbo alternator. The cool water enter the reactor again, and start the cycle again.
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a detailed information
about production of steam with the
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help
of
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gas
cooled nuclear reactor.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that the tool contains 2 mains part which are reactor and heat exchanger.

To
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begin
with, the reactor consist of pressure vessels, which covered by concrete radiation shielding.
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Inside of
this vessel there are four graphite moderators which contains of uranium fuel elements.
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Each
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moderators
attached to the two boron control rod and top
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of of
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this
roads contain charge tubes for loading fuel elements.

The process itself
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begin
with the input of cool
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gas
dust and it
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blown
to reactor through to
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gas
blower. The
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gas
heated in certain degree due to nuclear reactor's inside system then, it is to flow back into heat via hot
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gas
duct. At the same time water converted into steam which is power for turbo alternator. The cool water enter the reactor again, and
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start
the cycle again.
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IELTS academic he diagram below shows the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor.

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4 paragraphs
158 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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