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The charts show the percentage of income spent on food and other goods in 3 European countries from 1998 – 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts show the percentage of income spent on food and other goods in 3 European countries from 1998 – 2008. wk0N
The bar graphs provide us information on the amount of money spent on edible items and various goods in Three different European nations in the years 1998 and 2008. Overall, a higher percentage of income is spent on other goods in all the countries in both the years. The Expenses on Both the items increased in each nation over the period. Germany had the highest amount of income spent on both food and Other goods at a rate of 25% and approximately 18% respectively in the year 1998. In contrast, England had the lowest proportion of expense on both the goods at a value of 10% and just around 8% in the year 1998. The country with the highest percentage of income spent on edibles items and various goods is France at a value of 40% for both the items in the year 2008. However, again England spent the least amount of money on both goods at a rate of 15% for food and 35% for other goods in the year 2008.
The bar graphs provide us information on the amount of money
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European nations in the years 1998 and 2008.

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in all the countries in both the years. The Expenses on Both the
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increased in each nation over the period.

Germany had the highest amount of income
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on both food and Other
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goods
at a rate of 25% and approximately 18%
respectively
in the
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year
1998.
In contrast
, England had the lowest proportion of expense on both the
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at a value of 10% and
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around 8% in the
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1998.

The country with the highest percentage of income
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on edibles
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is France at a value of 40% for both the
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2008.
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the least amount of money on both
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IELTS academic The charts show the percentage of income spent on food and other goods in 3 European countries from 1998 – 2008.

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