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Write your answer in at least 150 words, where possible using your own words instead of the labels. Compare the temperatures inside and outside the greenhouse.

Write your answer in at least 150 words, where possible using your own words instead of the labels. Compare the temperatures inside and outside the greenhouse. a7eyw
The illustration helps with the support on the comparison between the temperatures inside and outside the greenhouse. Overall, there are 3 stages that are shown in the diagram which would make the temperature inside the greenhouse start with the same warmth as outside, but later become a lot hotter than outside. The process begins with the sunlight shining down into the greenhouse, which leads to the light from the sun to bypass through the layer from the greenhouse to be absorbed by the soil. At this time, the temperatures between inside and outside the greenhouse are the same, as when the sun had transferred heat to the soil inside the greenhouse, balancing the warmth between inside and outside. Later on, the sunlight is converted into heat energy and is being released from the soil, making the temperature inside the greenhouse hotter than outside as it stacks on each other, since the heat is unable to escape from the greenhouse. However, as the heat is being converted and released from the soil, the cool air descends into the soil, cooling it. In addition, with the soil being cooled down, it means that it will be able to absorb sunlight again to convert and release, making it a repeatable progress.
The illustration
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helps
with the support on the comparison between the
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temperatures
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inside
and
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outside
the
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greenhouse
.
Overall
, there are 3 stages that
are shown
in the diagram which would
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make
the
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temperature
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inside
the
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greenhouse
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start
with the same warmth as
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outside
,
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but
later become a lot hotter than outside.

The process
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begins
with the sunlight shining down into the
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greenhouse
, which leads to the light from the sun to bypass through the layer from the
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greenhouse
to
be absorbed
by the
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soil
. At this time, the
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temperatures
between
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inside
and
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outside
the
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greenhouse
are the same, as when the sun had transferred
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heat
to the
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soil
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inside
the
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greenhouse
, balancing the warmth between
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inside
and outside.

Later on, the sunlight
is converted
into
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heat
energy and is
being released
from the
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soil
, making the
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temperature
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inside
the
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greenhouse
hotter than
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outside
as it stacks on each other, since the
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heat
is unable to escape from the
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greenhouse
.
However
, as the
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heat
is
being converted
and released from the
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soil
, the cool air descends into the
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soil
, cooling it.
In addition
, with the
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soil
being cooled
down, it means that it will be able to absorb sunlight again to convert and release, making it
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "repeatable progress".
a repeatable progress
.
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IELTS academic Write your answer in at least 150 words, where possible using your own words instead of the labels. Compare the temperatures inside and outside the greenhouse.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
208 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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