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describe the given bar chart in 2002 2005 and 2010

describe the given bar chart in 2002 2005 and 2010 GL6Be

The given bar chart compares the rate of consumtion fruits and vegetables of demographics in UJ from 2002 to 2010. It is clear that, women like eating fruits and vegetables the most, making fruits and vegetables was best choice with them. At the same time, male and kids consumed that less than women. In 2002, the percentage of female and male used fruits and vegetables were 25% and 22%, respectively. Meanwhile, the figure for children just 11%. In 2006, there were slightly rose in the rate of women ate fruits and vegetables by 7% to 32%. At the same time, that of men and children were similar, by 65 to 28% and 5% to 16%, accordingly. Comparing with 2006, in 2010 the percentage of population in UJ using amout of plants had downward trend. The figure for female accounted for 27%. Meanwhile, there were slightly decrease in the proportion of consumtion fruits and vegetable of male and kids in UJ by 4% to 24% and 2% to 14%.

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 bar chart compares the rate of Possible spelling mistake found.consumption
consumtion
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fruits
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vegetables
 of demographics in Possible spelling mistake found.UpUsUKUVUAPJ
UJ
 from 2002 to 2010.

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clear
 that, women like eating You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruits
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vegetables
 the most, making You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
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vegetables
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was best
 choice with them. At the same time, male and kids consumed that less than women.

In 2002, the percentage of female and male This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
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fruits
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vegetables
 were 25% and 22%, respectively
. Meanwhile, the figure for children This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 11%. In 2006, there were slightly
 rose in the rate of women ate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruits
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vegetables
 by 7% to 32%. At the same time, that of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsresidentscitizens
men
 and children were similar, by 65 to 28% and 5% to 16%, accordingly
.

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UJ
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 of plants had downward Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: "trended".trended
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. The figure for female accounted for 27%. Meanwhile, there were slightly
 decrease in the proportion of Possible spelling mistake found.consumption
consumtion
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproductnutcropproducegrainberry
fruits
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withproducesaladherblegume
vegetable
 of male and kids in Possible spelling mistake found.UpUsUKUVUAPJ
UJ
 by 4% to 24% and 2% to 14%. 