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the GDP for IT industry and service industry of UK

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The bar chart compares the GDP for IT industry and service industry of UK from years 1992 to 2000. Overall, The gross domestic product for IT sector was increased with the minor fluctuations whereas the service area for an employment showed a steadily increasing trend. On whole, the rate of things during all subjected years for information technology region was outraced the other contemporary. In details, the value of GDP in 1992 was slightly above 7% for service industry while it was 4% for the IT region. The value rose drastically at 8% from 1992 to 1994. The bars remained stable for upcoming couple of years. However, it showed tremendous rise in 1998 and grew up to 12 %. This did not stop here and once again escalated dramatically for 12 to 15% for next two years. On contrary, the IT sector had only 4% of it which surged up to 7% till the end of 1994. It steadily increased for next three years and reach slightly less than 7%. It can be easily examine from the bar chart that in 1992 the percentage difference between values were greatly lower than the percentage decrease for year 2000.
The bar chart compares the GDP for IT industry and service industry of UK from years 1992 to 2000.
Overall
, The gross domestic product for IT sector
was increased
with the minor fluctuations whereas the service area for an employment
showed
a
steadily
increasing trend. On whole, the rate of things during all subjected years for information technology region
was outraced
the other contemporary.

In
details
, the value of GDP in 1992 was
slightly
above 7% for service industry while it was 4% for the IT region. The value rose
drastically
at 8% from 1992 to 1994. The bars remained stable for upcoming couple of years.
However
, it
showed
tremendous rise in 1998 and grew up to 12 %. This did not
stop
here and once again escalated
dramatically
for 12 to 15% for
next
two years.

On contrary, the IT sector had
only
4% of it which surged up to 7% till the
end
of 1994. It
steadily
increased for
next
three years and reach
slightly
less than 7%. It can be
easily
examine
from the bar chart that in 1992 the percentage difference between values were
greatly
lower than the percentage decrease for
year
2000.
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