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The graph show the expenditures of two country on for good during the 2014.

The graph show the expenditures of two country on for good during the 2014. qVrwp

The bar graph illustrates the information about the expensions of France and UK on to the four objects is 2014. To start with the given data, in the term of car the joker spent about £450, 000 on this as opposed to the France at £40, 000 pounds. Similarly, British expenditure book was higher than France, that was around £400, 000 to £300, 00 respectively. In the joke comedy utilise straight on camera just around the £450, 000 which was over a double that of France, that was only £150, 00. On the other hand, the amount of money paid at remaining good was higher in France. Above £350, 00 amount spent on computer by France which was more than British, who spend almost £300, 00. Neither of country spent on perfume which spent about £150, 00 in France, but less than £150, 00 in UK. over all, it can observed that UK expenditure on good rather than France. Furthermore, two countries utilized large amount of money on car and computer and least on perfume.

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