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Problems people have when move to new area bacen on information in the chart

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The chart shows three areas of dificulty people have when they move to another country and how these dificulties vary according to age. The greatest problem for people of all ages is arranging medical care. Between 32 and 37 percent of all people find this a problem. The second biggest problem is organising finances. Although only 29 percent of people over 55 are affected by this, 35 percent of the. middle age group and 34 percent of the 18-34 age group experience difficulties in this area. In contrast, fewer people have difficulties with education. While 19 percent of the 35-54 age group have trouble finding a suitable school for their children, the percentage of people in the other two age groups is much lower at 6 percent for the young age group and 3 percent for the over 55s. In general, all people experience problems to some extent. However, the percentage of the 35-54 age group who find their new arrangements difficult is slightly higher than the others, particularly in relation to education.
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is arranging medical care. Between 32 and 37
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finances. Although
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29
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people
over 55 are
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middle
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age
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and 34
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of the 18-34
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age
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experience difficulties in this area.
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have difficulties with education. While 19
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have trouble finding a suitable school for their children, the percentage of
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in the other two
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is much lower at 6
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for the young
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and 3
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for the over 55s.
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who find their new arrangements difficult is
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higher than the others,
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in relation to education.
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IELTS academic Problems people have when move to new area bacen on information in the chart

Academic
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173 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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