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The graph show changes in the trend of urban and rural population and by different age group from 1950 to 2040

The graph show changes in the trend of urban and rural population and by different age group from 1950 to 2040 OMxQk
The data gives information about the population in urban and rural areas as well as three particular age groups in one country from 1950 to 2000 with predictions to 2040. Overall, the total rural and urban areas witnessed a significant increase between 1950 and 2000. And it is expected to have a dramatic increase in population between 2000 and 2040. The total population was at 10% in 1950, then increased a total of 26% in the next 50 years. It is estimated that the percentages will go up about 43% in 2040. Respectively, urban and rural populations achieved 8% and 2. 5% in 1950, then in the next 50 years, both got a slight increase in population, with 12% for urban and 3. 5% for rural areas. It is expected for the urban area to have a dramatic increase in population, while rural areas will have a slight increase in 2040. In the first year of the period, 7% of people there were 16 to 65 years old, while for people below 15 years old and above 65 years old respectively, stood at 4. 5% and 2. 5%. In 2000, those who aged 16 to over 65 tripled, while kids and teenagers have a slight increase rate, reaching 5% and 7% respectively. In 2040, it is expected for the 16 to the 65-year-old age group to has a dramatic increase in rates, 27, 5% to be precise. Which are higher than the other two age groups, which is estimated to be at 9% of the elderly and 5. 5% of the young.
The data gives information about the
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as three particular age groups in one country from 1950 to 2000 with predictions to 2040.

Overall
, the total
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rural
and
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urban
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areas
witnessed a significant
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increase
between 1950 and 2000. And it is
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expected
to have a dramatic
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increase
in
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population
between 2000 and 2040.

The total
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population
was at 10% in 1950, then increased a total of 26% in the
next
50 years. It
is estimated
that the percentages will go up about 43% in 2040.
Respectively
,
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urban
and
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rural
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populations
achieved 8% and 2. 5% in 1950, then in the
next
50 years, both
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got
a slight
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increase
in
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population
, with 12% for
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urban
and 3. 5% for
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rural
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areas
. It is
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expected
for the
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urban
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area
to have a dramatic
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in
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, while
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areas
will have a slight
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increase
in 2040.

In the
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first
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of the period, 7% of
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there were 16 to 65 years
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, while for
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below 15 years
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and above 65 years
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respectively
, stood at 4. 5% and 2. 5%. In 2000, those who aged 16 to over 65 tripled, while kids and
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teenagers
have a slight
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increase
rate, reaching 5% and 7%
respectively
. In 2040, it is
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expected
for the 16 to the 65-year-
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old
age group to
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has
a dramatic
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increase
in rates, 27, 5% to be precise. Which are higher than the other two age groups, which
is estimated
to be at 9% of the elderly and 5. 5% of the young.

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