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The sales of ice creams, sandwich, and hot coffee every season, based on the data in the table.

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The table presents a kiosk's sales income per season. Although there are some fluctuation, is clear sandwiches are always sold in stable number in any season. On the other hand, ice creams and hot coffee sales are depended on the season temperature. So, in the most time in the year, strong contradiction between these two commodities sales number is suggested. Sandwiches' sales have unchanging pattern in any season. Its revenue in any season is more than $350 and less than $400. With small fluctuation, sandwiches request consistently in the middle of the other two products. Ice creams and hot coffee sales cross each other in every season, with hot coffee have higher sales in the plethora of the seasons. This pattern is start on the autumn where hot coffee sold four times more than ice creams. Even severe, in frozen winter season, hot coffee sales is eight times multiple than ice creams, which hot coffee sales break into the largest sales of any commodities that year with $850 as generated income. Start in the spring, ice creams sales raise into $290 and hot coffee stagnant in $600. Lastly in the summer, ice creams has its sales peaks, however hot coffee have plummeted business. In this season only there are anomalies in the sales pattern, when both hot coffee and ice creams have the same sales number with $400 revenue.
The table presents a kiosk's
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income per season.

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fluctuation, is
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clear
sandwiches are always sold in stable number in any
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season
.
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, ice
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creams
and hot
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coffee
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sales
are depended
on the
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season
temperature.
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sales
number
is suggested
.

Sandwiches'
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sales
have unchanging pattern in any
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. Its revenue in any
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season
is more than $350 and less than $400. With
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small
fluctuation, sandwiches request
consistently
in the middle of the other two products.

Ice
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creams
and hot
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coffee
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sales
cross each other in every
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season
, with hot
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coffee
have higher
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sales
in the plethora of the
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seasons
. This pattern is
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start
on the autumn where hot
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coffee
sold four times more than ice
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creams
. Even severe, in frozen winter
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season
, hot
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coffee
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is eight times
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than ice
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creams
, which hot
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coffee
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break into the largest
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of any commodities that year with $850 as generated income.
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Start
in the spring, ice
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creams
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sales
raise into $290 and hot
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coffee
stagnant in $600.
Lastly
in the summer, ice
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creams
has its
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sales
peaks,
however
hot
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coffee
have plummeted business. In this
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season
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only
there are anomalies in the
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sales
pattern, when both hot
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coffee
and ice
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creams
have the same
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number with $400 revenue.
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IELTS academic The sales of ice creams, sandwich, and hot coffee every season, based on the data in the table.

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