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The Graph represents export details of different categories during the year 2015 and 2016 in billions.While table outlines changes in proportion Units are measured in percentage of several product categories during the year 2015 & 2016.

The Graph represents export details of different categories during the year 2015 and 2016 in billions. While table outlines changes in proportion Units are measured in percentage of several product categories during the year 2015 & 2016. 5LOge
The Graph represents export details of different categories during the year 2015 and 2016 in billions. While table outlines changes in proportion Units are measured in percentage of several product categories during the year 2015 & 2016. Overall, it is crystal clear that during the perod of 2016, petroleum products and engineered goods exported more than others. The data in the table reveals that textiles had highest percentage of trading during the later year. Accoriding to the graph & tabular data, exportation of all products except gems and jewellery had been increased during year 2015-2016 by 3%, 8. 5%, 0. 81% and 15. 24% respectively. whereas gems and jewellery exportation had decline at 5. 18% in 2016. In comparision with agricultural and textiles products, it had same trading proportion during year 2016. while comparing both the year proporton, agricultural goods have almost same proportion with difference of 0. 81% gross in 2016.
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exported more than others. The data in the table reveals that textiles had
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percentage of trading during the later year.

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except gems and
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2015-2016 by 3%, 8. 5%, 0. 81% and 15. 24%
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whereas
gems and
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jewellery
exportation had decline at 5. 18% in 2016.

In
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with agricultural and textiles
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, it had same trading proportion during
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2016.
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, agricultural
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have almost same proportion with difference of 0. 81% gross in 2016.

IELTS academic The Graph represents export details of different categories during the year 2015 and 2016 in billions. While table outlines changes in proportion Units are measured in percentage of several product categories during the year 2015 & 2016.

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