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The graph presents the contributions as a percentage of GDP in India between 1960 and 2000

The graph presents the contributions as a percentage of GDP in India between 1960 and 2000 R51BP
Overall, there was a sharp change in all the figures. Over 40 years the data of agriculture and services had a steep conversion. At the beginning of the period, agriculture was a high value and then also hit the lowest point in 2000. Meanwhile, the industry rate is the opposite. Move to the chart in more detail, the figure for agriculture declined significantly from over 60% in 1960 to about 14% in the last stage. Moreover, the proportion of industry just has a slightly changing. From approximately 15% in 1960 to more than 26% in 1980, then it goes to remain stable in 20 years later. At the same time, the percentage of services with the major trend to go up with enormously. It increases about 55% to 60% in 40 years later. The graph presents the contributions as a percentage of GDP in India between 1960 and 2000.
Overall
, there was a sharp
change
in all the figures. Over 40 years the data of agriculture and services had a steep conversion. At the beginning of the period, agriculture was a high value and then
also
hit the lowest point in 2000. Meanwhile, the industry rate is the opposite.

Move
to the chart in more detail, the figure for agriculture declined
significantly
from over 60% in 1960 to about 14% in the last stage.
Moreover
, the proportion of industry
just
has a
slightly
changing. From approximately 15% in 1960 to more than 26% in 1980, then it goes to remain stable in 20 years later.

At the same time, the percentage of services with the major trend to go up with
enormously
. It increases about 55% to 60% in 40 years later. The graph presents the contributions as a percentage of GDP in India between 1960 and 2000.
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IELTS academic The graph presents the contributions as a percentage of GDP in India between 1960 and 2000

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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