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The graph presents the amount of visitors traveling to Caribbean island from the year 2010 to 2017.It is clearly seen that the number of tourist visit the island experienced an upward trend throughout the years.

The graph presents the amount of visitors traveling to Caribbean island from the year 2010 to 2017. It is clearly seen that the number of tourist visit the island experienced an upward trend throughout the years. B72Nj
The graph presents the amount of visitors traveling to Caribbean island from the year 2010 to 2017. It is clearly seen that the number of tourist visit the island experienced an upward trend throughout the years. Meanwhile, the line for ones that stayed on the island fluctuated wildly. Based on the information provided, the amount of tourists visiting Caribbean but stayed on cruise ships felt slightly in the year 2012 with only 0. 25 millions of visitors, which is one half compared to 2011. Right after that, the numbers levelled off, with a raise from 0. 25 to 0. 5 millions of tourist each year, and ends with 2 millions in 2017. On the other hand, visitors stayed on the island during their trip started off at 0. 75, which is fifty percent higher than the ones on cruise ships. After that, this numbers rose steadily from 2011 with 0. 75 to 2012 with 1. 25. in 2013 the amount of visitors reached 1. 5 and stayed like that for three years before dropped down to 1. 25 in 2016.
The graph presents the amount of
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visitors
traveling
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to Caribbean
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island
from the
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year
2010 to 2017. It is
clearly
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that the number of tourist visit the
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island
experienced an upward trend throughout the years. Meanwhile, the line for
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ones
that
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stayed
on the
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island
fluctuated
wildly
. Based on the information provided, the amount of tourists visiting Caribbean
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but
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stayed
on cruise ships felt
slightly
in the
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year
2012 with
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0.
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25 millions of
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visitors
, which is one half compared to 2011. Right after that, the numbers levelled off, with a raise from 0. 25 to 0.
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5 millions of
tourist each
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year
, and ends with 2 millions in 2017.
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,
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visitors
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stayed
on the
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island
during their trip
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started
off at 0. 75, which is fifty percent higher than the
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ones
on cruise ships. After that, this numbers rose
steadily
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from 2011 with 0
. 75 to 2012 with 1. 25. in 2013 the amount of
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visitors
reached 1. 5 and
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stayed
like that for three years
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before
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dropped down
to 1. 25 in 2016.
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IELTS academic The graph presents the amount of visitors traveling to Caribbean island from the year 2010 to 2017. It is clearly seen that the number of tourist visit the island experienced an upward trend throughout the years.

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