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The graph demonstrates the figures for travelers who came to a Caribbean island in the period between 2010 and 2017.

The graph demonstrates the figures for travelers who came to a Caribbean island in the period between 2010 and 2017. MqVbp
The graph demonstrates the figures for travelers who came to a Caribbean island in the period between 2010 and 2017. Overall, the total number of tourists showed an increasing tendency throughout the period. There were some changes in the ranking of the numbers of visitors who stayed on ships and on land. In 2010, the total number of tourists who visited the island was about 1 million, with more than 800 thousand people staying on land and about 200 people staying on cruise ships. Four years later, the total figure increased significantly to about 2. 5 million people. There were approximately 1. 5 million people who stayed on land, compared to 1 million people who vacationed on cruise ships. In 2017, the island had a total of about 3. 5 million visitors. The number of people who spent their vacations on cruise ships surpassed that of people who stayed on the island in 2016 and rose to around 2 million in 2017. At the end, there were only 1. 5 million people who chose to spend their holiday on the island.
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staying on land and about 200
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