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The chart below shows the number of people who were killed in the road accidents in four different countries from 1991 to 1998. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of people who were killed in the road accidents in four different countries from 1991 to 1998. w7roq
The polly live graph illucidates how the number of mishaps has taken variation in your specific countries Over a period of 9-yeau - 8pm (1991-1998). Overall, having a myopic look at a linear representation it is vivid that the number of population who lost their lives in road accidents in Algeria was recordered maximum than other country whereas Zambia showed ever-decreasing-trend in given period. Further delving into line graph, it is crystal clear that, the number of people who killed in accidents in Alegeria which was recorded at 30, 000 in an initial year and reached at it's double to 1998 however in Zambia it exhibited at 50, 000 within 7 year it decreased by 40000. Moving further road accident become fatal for Nigerian because where the count ever of killing people reported rising trend & starting from 20. 000 in 1991 and number reached 50, 000 in 1998. Zimbabwe showed variation in by road disasters.
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of population who lost their
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than other country whereas Zambia
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of
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who killed in accidents in
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where the count ever of killing
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reported rising trend & starting from 20. 000 in 1991 and
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reached 50, 000 in 1998. Zimbabwe
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variation in by road disasters.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of people who were killed in the road accidents in four different countries from 1991 to 1998.

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