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The graph line illustrates the number of people graduated in Canada by gender between the period of 1992 to 2007.

The graph line illustrates the number of people graduated in Canada by gender between the period of 1992 to 2007. Overall, it is evident that the number of graduations in geral has substantially increased over the years. It is also clear that there are more women graduating than men and the peak of graduations for them is in 2006. In 1992, there were around 100, 000 women getting a Bachelor degree. On the other hand, the number of men was lower, as 70, 000 men completed graduation that year. Moreover, both had a significant and rapid growth as in 2006 around 150, 000 women concluded university, compared to around 100, 000 men. Furthermore, the date indicates that between the years 1994 to 1998 Canadians experienced a decrease in the number of academic graduations. Women went from slightly more than 100, 000 to 100, 00 graduations, while men went to around 75, 000 to around 70, 000.
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graduated in Canada by gender between the period of 1992 to 2007.

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that there are more
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graduating than
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and the peak of
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for them is in 2006.

In 1992, there were
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100, 000
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getting a Bachelor degree.
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was lower, as 70, 000
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completed
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that year.
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, both had a significant and rapid growth as in 2006
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around
150, 000
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women
concluded university, compared to
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100, 000
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.

Furthermore
, the date indicates that between the years 1994 to 1998 Canadians experienced a decrease in the
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of academic
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went to
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75, 000 to
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70, 000.
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IELTS academic The graph line illustrates the number of people graduated in Canada by gender between the period of 1992 to 2007.

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