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The graph is a Bar Graph, which depicts the households live in England and Wales as owned and rented accommodation from 1918 to 2011.

The graph is a Bar Graph, which depicts the households live in England and Wales as owned and rented accommodation from 1918 to 2011. GJMxo
The graph is a Bar Graph, which depicts the households live in England and Wales as owned and rented accommodation from 1918 to 2011. Overall, it can be seen that in the initial years the households were rented accommodation on the higher side, but trends changed in the end year of the graph; was that the households were owned accommodation was increased drastically. In the initial year that is 1918, the households were rented accommodation was 87% higher than the households was owned accommodation was 22% with the difference of 65%; the rented accommodation was always on the high level till 1961. In 1971, it was the first time that both the households were rented and owned accommodation at 50% on the same level without any difference. From 1981 there was a constant increase in the households was owned accommodation than the households was rented accommodation till the end year of 2011 with the difference of 27%
The graph is a Bar Graph, which depicts the
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households
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live
in England and Wales as
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owned
and rented
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accommodation
from

1918 to 2011.

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, it can be
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seen
that in the initial years the
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households
were rented
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accommodation
on the higher side,
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but
trends
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changed
in the
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end
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year
of the graph; was that the
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households
were
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owned
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accommodation
was increased
drastically
.

In the initial
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year
that is
1918, the
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households
were rented
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accommodation
was 87% higher than the
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households
was
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owned
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accommodation
was 22% with the difference of 65%; the rented
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accommodation
was always on the high level till 1961.

In 1971, it was the
first
time that both the
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households
were rented
and
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owned
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accommodation
at 50% on the same level without any difference.

From 1981 there was a constant increase in the
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households
was
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owned
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accommodation
than the
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households
was rented
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accommodation
till the
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end
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year
of 2011 with the difference of 27%
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IELTS academic The graph is a Bar Graph, which depicts the households live in England and Wales as owned and rented accommodation from 1918 to 2011.

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