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The plan illustrates the suggested renovations of the territory of a particular museum. It is clear that two zones will be replaced, one new area will be built and also a number of changes will affect the lifts and the main entrance. First, the entrance will be moved from Spring street to Patterson street. Consequently, both lifts will be transferred under the south wall of the open atrium which will cause the walkway disappearance. These actions will allow the relocation of the Marine room from the south-west corner of the museum to the place where the previous entrance was. Thus, the store area will occupy the previous marine room place and provide more space for the gemstones zone that will be swapped with the store premises that will be considerably enlarged. Moreover, a new modern art space will appear in the north-west corner of the museum. Such places as toilets, open atrium, dinosaur exhibition, mind and body room and zone where visitors can explore the evolution theory will remain unchanged.

The plan illustrates the suggested renovations of the territory of a particular museum. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that two zones will be replaced
, one new area will be built
 and also
 a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 will affect the lifts and the main entrance.

First
, the entrance will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 from Spring street to Patterson street. Consequently
, both lifts will be transferred
 under the south wall of the open atrium which will cause the walkway disappearance. These actions will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 the relocation of the Marine room from the south-west corner of the museum to the place where the previous entrance was. Thus
, the store area will occupy the previous marine room place and provide more space for the gemstones zone that will be swapped
 with the store premises that will be considerably
 enlarged.

Moreover
, a new modern art space will appear in the north-west corner of the museum. Such places as toilets, open atrium, dinosaur exhibition, mind and body room and zone where visitors can explore the evolution theory will remain unchanged. 