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The graph illustrates the total income percentage that people spend on fuel in two different countries.

The graph illustrates the total income percentage that people spend on fuel in two different countries. r8L5p
The graph illustrates the total income percentage that people spend on fuel in two different countries. Overall, there is a difference of people in US and UK to spend salary on fuel. The poorest people the highest spending on fuel in the US. In contrast with people in the UK. More details, poor people in the US spend money to fuel around 4% until above 5% of their income. While middle-income people spend more than 3% to 5%. Whereas rich people only use approximately 2. 5% to 4% of their income on fuel. On the contrary, in the UK the richest people can spend 3% to 4% on fuel, the middle-income people 3% to almost 4%, while the poor people only 1% to 3% spend money on fuel.
The graph illustrates the total income percentage that
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in US and UK to
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salary on
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. The poorest
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the highest spending on
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in the US.
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in the UK.

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around 4% until above 5% of their income.
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more than 3% to 5%.
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approximately 2. 5% to 4% of their income on
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, in the UK the richest
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3% to 4% on
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, the middle-income
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3% to almost 4%, while the poor
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1% to 3%
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the total income percentage that people spend on fuel in two different countries.

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  American English
3 paragraphs
128 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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