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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

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The bar chart represents the proportion ofpeople who often ate at fast food restaurants in the USA in the years2003, 2006 and 2013. Overall, during a decade, the highest amount ofpopulation went to the restaurants whether once a week or once or twice a month. On the other hand, people attended on a daily basis these places, which wereconsidered rare. The proportion of individuals went to fast foodcafes once a week or month was around 30%. However, in the following years thetendency has changed slightly, where the proportion has varied from 25% to approximately33%. People who attended the restaurant several times aweek were specifically popular in 2006, the rate was 20%. In the years 2003 and2013, this percentage was more than 15%. In the restaurants where people seldom had ameal, in particular a few times within the year, initially it was less than15%, while in the next 10 years’ period, it reached 15%. The percentage of individuals, which had somefood in cafes every day or never, was 5% or less during this period.
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ate at
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restaurants
in the USA in the years2003, 2006 and 2013.
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, during a decade, the highest amount
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ofpopulation
went to the
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restaurants
whether once a week or once or twice a month.
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people
attended on a daily basis these places, which
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once a week or month was around 30%.
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changed
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, where the proportion has varied from 25% to approximately33%.
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who attended the
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restaurant
several times
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aweek
were
specifically
popular in 2006, the rate was 20%. In the years 2003 and2013, this percentage was more than 15%. In the
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restaurants
where
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people
seldom had
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ameal
,
in particular
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year
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it was less than15%, while in the
next
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somefood
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every day or never, was 5% or less during this period.
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