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The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed.

The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed. xm2Eg
The pictures provide information about the area, which is located in a small town, is named Springsby as well as the information related to the present time, also in the future, which might be improved. Overall, the facilities will be added more than now, at the same time the empty spaces are filled fully according to the future plan. Meanwhile, the park, school and housing estate, which has already existed during the time, are not replaced or changed. In future, two shopping centres are going to be built in that area so that the field will become more crowded, consequently, the plan involves a plethora of automobile parks compared to at the moment. Based on planning, the south shopping centre would be covered more territory than the north shopping mall. On the other hand, the park has covered more fields than in the future. In contrast, the lake will be transformed to cover from the planning feature. Thus, the car park, which is located in the lake park, would have the largest field rather than other vehicles parks.
The pictures provide information about the area, which
is located
in a
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small
town,
is named
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Springsby
as well
as the information related to the present time,
also
in the
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future
, which might be
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improved
.

Overall
, the facilities will be
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added
more than
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now
, at the same time the empty spaces
are filled
fully
according to the
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future
plan. Meanwhile, the
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park
, school and housing estate, which has already existed during the time, are not replaced or
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
changed
.

In
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future
, two shopping
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centres
are going to
be built
in that area
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so
that the field will become more crowded,
consequently
, the plan involves a plethora of automobile
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parks
compared to at the moment. Based on planning, the south shopping
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centre
would
be covered
more territory than the north shopping mall.

On the other hand
, the
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park
has covered more fields than in the
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future
.
In contrast
, the lake will
be transformed
to cover from the planning feature.
Thus
, the car
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park
, which
is located
in the lake
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park
, would have the largest field
rather
than other vehicles
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
parks
.
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IELTS academic The maps below show one part of a small town called Springsby as it is now, and plans for how it might be developed.

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