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The graph illustrates that there are numerous tourists who are visiting a one Carribbean island in the period of 2010 to 2017.

The graph illustrates that there are numerous tourists who are visiting a one Carribbean island in the period of 2010 to 2017. KwndL
The graph illustrates that there are numerous tourists who are visiting a one Carribbean island in the period of 2010 to 2017. Overall, it is clear that the visitors were staying on cruise ships and island was increased slightly in the given period whereas, the total number of visitors were staying on cruise ship and as well as on island has dramatically increased throughout the period. Firstly, in 2010 the visitors who are staying on the cruise ship is about 0. 25 million and then it went up to 0. 5 million in 2011. However, it fell down in 2012 and the figure was approximately 0. 25 million. After 2012 there was tremendous increase, the tourists who are staying on the cruise ship until 2017. The figure range around between 0. 5 to 2 million. Simultaneously, tourists staying on island, it was started nearly around 0. 75 million in 2010 and remained steady in 2011 and after gradually increased in 2012 and 2013. The figure was about 1. 25 and 1. 5 million and after steady in between 2013 to 2015. There was a slight decrease in 2016 and 2017 and again it went up to 1. 5 million. Secondly, the total number of visitors started at 1 million in 2010 and continued to grow between 2010 and 2017. The figure reached a peak of 3. 5 million in 2017.
The graph illustrates that there are numerous tourists who are visiting a one
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Carribbean
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island
in the period of 2010 to 2017.

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, it is
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clear
that the
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visitors
were
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cruise
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ships
and
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island
was increased
slightly
in the
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given
period whereas, the total number of
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visitors
were
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staying
on
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cruise
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ship
and
as well
as on
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island
has
dramatically
increased throughout the period.

Firstly
, in 2010 the
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visitors
who are
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staying
on the
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cruise
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ship
is about 0. 25
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million
and then it went up to 0. 5
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million
in 2011.
However
, it fell down in 2012 and the
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figure
was approximately 0. 25
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million
. After 2012 there was tremendous increase, the tourists who are
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staying
on the
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cruise
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ship
until 2017. The
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figure
range around between 0. 5 to 2
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million
.
Simultaneously
, tourists
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on
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, it was
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started
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around 0. 75
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million
in 2010 and remained steady in 2011 and after
gradually
increased in 2012 and 2013. The
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figure
was about 1. 25 and 1. 5
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million
and after steady in
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between 2013 to 2015
. There was a slight decrease in 2016 and 2017 and again it went up to 1. 5 million.

Secondly
, the total number of
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visitors
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started
at 1
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million
in 2010 and continued to grow between 2010 and 2017. The
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reached a peak of 3. 5
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million
in 2017.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates that there are numerous tourists who are visiting a one Carribbean island in the period of 2010 to 2017.

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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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