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The graph illustrates the growth of population in urban areas in different parts of the world.

The graph illustrates the growth of population in urban areas in different parts of the world. GNk5e
The bar chart shows the proportion of people living in urban regions in five particular countries (Japan, Thailand, Pakistan, India, Bangladesh) from 1960 to 2050. Overall, it is clear that while Bangladesh had the highest urban population level, Japan had the lowest one throughout the mentioned period. In addition, it is evident that all nations experienced a gradual increase in the percentage of urban residents. Japan and Thailand were two countries with the lowest level of people habiting urban areas. In 1960, 12 percent of the Japanese lived in the cities, as opposed to 15 percent in Thailand. The figure for Japan then roared up to 40 percent in 2010 and is expected to keep rising until reaching exactly one half by 2050. Similarly, the percentage of the Thai living in urban areas sharply went up to 45 percent in 2010 and is predicted to increase by 10 percent in the next 40 years. Regarding remaining countries, in 1960, India had the lowest level of urban habitants (at 40 percent), compared to that in Bangladesh (at 65 percent). However, in the next 50 years, the figure for India saw a significant rise to 75 percent, which was the same as that for Pakistan. By 2050, there is predicted to be a slow increase in the ratio of people inhabiting urban regions in these 3 countries. In addition, India is seen to have 5 percent of urban people higher than Pakistan.
The bar chart
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shows
the proportion of
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people
living in
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urban
regions in five particular
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countries
(Japan, Thailand, Pakistan, India, Bangladesh) from 1960 to 2050.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that while Bangladesh had the highest
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urban
population level, Japan had the lowest one throughout the mentioned period.
In addition
, it is evident that all nations experienced a gradual increase in the percentage of
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urban
residents.

Japan and Thailand were two
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countries
with the lowest level of
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people
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habiting
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urban
areas. In 1960, 12
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percent
of the Japanese
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lived
in the cities, as opposed to 15
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percent
in Thailand. The figure for Japan then roared up to 40
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percent
in 2010 and is
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expected
to
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keep
rising until reaching exactly one half by 2050.
Similarly
, the percentage of the Thai living in
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urban
areas
sharply
went up to 45
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percent
in 2010 and
is predicted
to increase by 10
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percent
in the
next
40 years.

Regarding remaining
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countries
, in 1960, India had the lowest level of
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urban
habitants (at 40
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percent)
, compared to that in Bangladesh (at 65
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percent)
.
However
, in the
next
50 years, the figure for India
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saw
a significant rise to 75
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percent
, which was the same as that for Pakistan. By 2050, there
is predicted
to be a slow increase in the ratio of
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people
inhabiting
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urban
regions in these 3
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countries
.
In addition
, India is
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seen
to have 5
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of
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urban
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higher than Pakistan.

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