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The diagram about the production and processing of milk

The diagram about the production and processing of milk OlNR7

The production and process method of milk as well as milk products for consumer sale have been depicted by the given pictorial diagram. Overall, it is clearly seen that there are eight stages to making milk and their products. It starts with cows grazing and ends with selling milk and dairy products into supermarket. To begin with, in initial stage, cows are grazed before, milk is out from them by milk machine in twice a day. Following this, milk is stored in refrigeration tank for being cold. Then, milk is filled into milk tanker for delivered into dairy farm on daily basis. Moreover, in manufacture place, milk is passed through pipe for processed. As a result, milk is pasteurized and packed into bottles and the dairy products such as cheese, cream and butters are made from milk. Lastly, the milk bottles and milk products are ready to sell into supermarket.

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starts
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before
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cold
. Then, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is filled
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 tanker for delivered into dairy farm on daily basis.

Moreover
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milk
is passed
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, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcreambuttermilkhalf-and-half
milk
is pasteurized
 and packed into bottles and the dairy You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommodityprofitbrandworkamountcrop
products
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. Lastly
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