Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The graph illustrates how many foreign students from five different countries enrolled in graphic design courses namely Computer-Aided-Design and photography at a university in the south of En

The graph illustrates how many foreign students from five different countries enrolled in graphic design courses namely Computer-Aided-Design and photography at a university in the south of En eEBdK

The graph illustrates how many foreign students from five different countries enrolled in graphic design courses namely Computer-Aided-Design and photography at a university in the south of England. Overall, it can be seen that more students are enrolled from Sweden than any other country. Also, the number of male students who joined in the CAD is significantly than that of female students According to the bar chart, Sweden is the country that has the largest number of both female and male students joining in CAD course. For each nationality, the males taking the CAD core option outnumber the females, except in the case of Syria students with 3 females and only 1 male. In addition, the figure of both male and female students taking the CAD option from Germany and France have similar profiles with approximately 4 male students and 2 female students As for the photography option, female students from all the nations except Syria which has no female joining the course appear to be dominant. In fact, while there are 3 students reported for females from Spain who chose to study photography course, in Syria, no female student taking a photography option.

The graph illustrates how This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 foreign You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 from five This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 countries enrolled in graphic design You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
courses
namely
 Computer-Aided-Design and photography at a university in the south of England.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that more You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
are enrolled
 from Sweden than any other country. Also
, the number of male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatedfused
joined
 in the CAD is Use "(significantly)" to make a comparison with this adjective.(significantly)
significantly
 than that of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 students

According to the bar chart, Sweden is the country that has the largest number of both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 and male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 joining in CAD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
. For each nationality, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withboyguyfather
males
 taking the CAD core You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrightchoicebenefitpreferenceprivilegeopportunity
option
 outnumber the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlmother
females
, except in the case of Syria You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 with 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlmother
females
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 1 male. In addition
, the figure of both male and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 taking the CAD You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrightchoicebenefitpreferenceprivilegeopportunity
option
 from Germany and France have similar profiles with approximately 4 male You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 and 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphstudents.students!students?students:students,students;
students


As for the photography You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrightchoicebenefitpreferenceprivilegeopportunity
option
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 from all the nations except Syria which has no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
 joining the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 appear to be dominant. In fact, while there are 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
students
 reported for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgirlmother
females
 from Spain who chose to study photography You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
, in Syria, no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeminine
female
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withundergraduatescholarpupiljuniorgraduate
student
 taking a photography You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrightchoicebenefitpreferenceprivilegeopportunity
option
. 