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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of locations where people connect to the internet between 1998 and 2004.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of locations where people connect to the internet between 1998 and 2004. Overall, it is clear that the trend of access to the internet at home increased during the period of time, while those people getting online at work and colleges decreased. Meanwhile, the number of ones accessed at library fluctuated. From 1998 to 2000, the percentage of people connecting to the internet at home had the highest point, nearly 55% in 2014, which was about 10% higher than in 2000. By contrast, the number of people accessing at workplace had significantly decreased from 20% in 1998 to 10% in 2004. In the same period, people who accessed the internet at colleges had constantly around 20% in 1998, 2000 and 2002, which was a gradual decrease to 18% in 2004. Finally, Library place where people connect to the internet experienced a fluctuation with the maximum point about 15% in 2000.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of locations where
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connect to the internet between 1998 and 2004.

Overall
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that the trend of access to the internet at home increased during the period of time, while those
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people
getting online at work and colleges decreased. Meanwhile, the number of ones accessed at library fluctuated.

From 1998 to 2000, the percentage of
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people
connecting to the internet at home had the highest point,
nearly
55% in 2014, which was about 10% higher than in 2000. By contrast, the number of
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people
accessing at workplace had
significantly
decreased from 20% in 1998 to 10% in 2004.

In the same period,
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people
who accessed the internet at colleges had
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around 20% in 1998, 2000 and 2002, which was a gradual decrease to 18% in 2004.
Finally
, Library place where
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connect to the internet experienced a fluctuation with the maximum point about 15% in 2000.
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