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The graph below shows government in billions on the infrastructure for tourists. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows government in billions on the infrastructure for tourists. qa3n5
The graph compares how government in four countries like France, UK, Germany and Spain spends money in billion on tourist infrastructure during the period of 2010 ans 2022. It is clear that France and Germany have been investing huge money since 2010 and will be spening more on 2020 and 2022, while Germany and Spain have made a dramatic fall this sector from the year of 2018 and 2019. France has always been shown a good interest to spend money, at 52 billion since 2010, while at the same year, UK invested only 20 billion on tourism infrastructure. And, by the year of 2022, both of these countries have a plan to spend almost 80 to 85 billions to increase international tourist's attraction. On the other hand, Germany and Spain has been paying a moderate attention on tourism sector by spending 60 ans 30 billions since 2010. At 2018 and 2019, a sudden fall is shown on tourism investment for two of these countries. Even, they have plan to pay much less, around 20 billion by the year of 2022.
The graph compares how
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in four countries like France, UK, Germany and Spain spends money in
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billion
on tourist infrastructure during the period of 2010 ans 2022.

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that France and Germany have been investing huge money since 2010 and will be
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more on 2020 and 2022, while Germany and Spain have made a dramatic fall this sector from the
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of 2018 and 2019. France has always
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interest to spend money, at 52
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since 2010, while at the same
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, UK invested
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only
20
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billion
on tourism infrastructure. And, by the
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of 2022, both of these countries have a plan to spend almost 80 to 85
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billions
to increase international tourist's attraction.
On the other hand
, Germany and Spain has been paying a moderate attention on tourism sector by spending 60 ans 30
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billions
since 2010. At 2018 and 2019, a sudden fall
is shown
on tourism investment for two of these countries. Even, they have plan to pay much less, around 20
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billion
by the
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of 2022.
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