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Bar schow the the present age for the people in the collage in year 2010 and 2020 summers the many feather and give you view.

Bar schow the the present age for the people in the collage in year 2010 and 2020 summers the many feather and give you view. eELOV
The given bar graph schow that the porprocition adults enroll in the university of the from 2010 and 2020. In Canada, India, chani, the USA. Overall it is clear for the graph. that maximum person tage of the enrolls is India while the list is Canada also the rest of the contrary has the flactivatio except USA. Looking at the graph more detail highest India has the highest student enrolled in the colleges in 2010 it was 68% Japan ass 60% percentage in the same year The percentage slightly decreased In India and China to 10% we compare to previous Decade respectivelyBy contrast Divis has a percentage of 10% in the year 2010 surprisingly it reach to 55% in the year 2020 the people who enrol in the colleges the USA has been stable in complete decade with the percentage of 40% The students who enrol in the colleges later in a queue in years
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porprocition
adults
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enroll
in the university of the
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from 2010 and 2020
. In Canada, India,
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chani
, the USA.

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it is
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that
maximum person
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tage
of the
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enrolls
is India while the list is Canada
also
the rest of the contrary has the
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flactivatio
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except USA
.

Looking at the graph more detail
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highest
India has the highest student enrolled in the colleges in 2010 it was 68% Japan ass 60%
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percentage
in the same
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year
The
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percentage
slightly
decreased In India and China to 10% we compare to previous Decade
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respectivelyBy
contrast
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Divis
has a
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percentage
of 10% in the
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year
2010
surprisingly
it
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reach
to 55% in the
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year
2020 the
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people
who enrol in the colleges the USA has been stable in complete decade with the
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IELTS academic Bar schow the the present age for the people in the collage in year 2010 and 2020 summers the many feather and give you view.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
154 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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