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The graph gives information about the drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph gives information about the drinking habits of the US population by age. mk2L
The given graph illustrates the data of four alcoholic habits of the US population by different age groups. Overall, it is clear that majority of the people who live in the USA are non–drinkers whereas the elder people are light and ex-drinkers. The age group of 16-24 and 25-34 people who never consume alcohol are 60% and 55% respectively. However, a merely of 7% and 4% have taken alcohol in their past and 25-30% of them are drinking partially, 2-7% of them are heavy drinkers. On the contrary, the middle age group of 35-44 and 45-54 people who never drunk is 60% and around 57%. On the other hand, a very few of 3% and 5% people had drunk in their earlier days, 20% of them are drunk lightly, 11-14% of them drunk heavily. The elder age group of 55-64 and 64-75 people who are non-drinker is about 50-45%, while the people who had drunk in their young age are 20-40%, 10-12% of population of these age group had drunk lightly. 2-7% of them are drinking highly.
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non–drinkers
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are light and ex-drinkers.

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of 16-24 and 25-34
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people
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never consume alcohol are 60% and 55%
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, 2-7% of them are heavy drinkers.
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of 35-44 and 45-54
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never
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few of 3% and 5%
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in their earlier days, 20% of them are
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heavily
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The elder
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of 55-64 and 64-75
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are non-drinker is about 50-45%, while the
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in their young
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IELTS academic The graph gives information about the drinking habits of the US population by age.

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