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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. O7rN
The given line graph compares the yearly expenses on mobile phone services in contrast to landline services of people in the US over a decade year from 2001 to 2010. Overall, there has been a sharp increase in the money spent for cell phone services whereas residential phone services have seen a steady decline in the states up until 2010. According to the Consumer Expenditure Survey by the US bureau of labor Statistics, the average yealy spending on mobile phone bills was lower than $200 dollars at the start of the decade. As the years passed, the expenditure on cell phone started increasing rapidly and consequently passing over bills paid for telephone bills during 2006 to reach an intersection at $550. By the end of the decade, the annual spending had risen up to nearly $800. In contrast to the climbing cell phone charges, the telephone bill at home saw a decrease by about 2 times to reach about $350. The initial average expenditure on residential phone services was about $700, which was drastically higher from the payment made on cell phone bills. Conversely, the expenses on cell phone services was two times higher than residential telephone services by 2010.
The
given
line graph compares the yearly expenses on mobile
phone
services
in contrast
to landline
services
of
people
in the US over a decade year from 2001 to 2010.

Overall
, there has been a sharp increase in the money spent for
cell
phone
services
whereas residential
phone
services
have
seen
a steady decline in the states up until 2010.

According to the Consumer Expenditure Survey by the US bureau of labor Statistics, the average
yealy
spending on mobile
phone
bills
was lower than
$200
dollars at the
start
of the decade. As the years passed, the expenditure on
cell
phone
started
increasing
rapidly
and
consequently
passing over
bills
paid for telephone
bills
during 2006 to reach an intersection at $550. By the
end
of the decade, the annual spending had risen up to
nearly
$800.

In contrast
to the climbing
cell
phone
charges, the telephone
bill
at home
saw
a decrease by about 2 times to reach about $350. The initial average expenditure on residential
phone
services
was about $700, which was
drastically
higher from the payment made on
cell
phone
bills
.
Conversely
, the expenses on
cell
phone
services
was two times higher than residential telephone
services
by 2010.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows US consumers' average annual expenditures on cell phone and residential phone services between 2001 and 2010. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
200 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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