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The charts show average levels of participation in education and the highest education levels of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore

The charts show average levels of participation in education and the highest education levels of adults from 2000 to 2010 in Singapore JG05

The illustration gives information about the highest level of adult education in Singapore for 10 years. Overall, it is noticeable that there are more men who have graduated from high school than women. As well, most of the changes occurred in primary school qualification. In 10 years, it has increased 4 times. It can be seen from the graph that within 10 years, the level of men who graduated from school gradually increases and from 2000 to 2010, it reaches almost 12. As for the female sex, it is kept stable for two years, and then does not increase much and until the end of 2010 does not have much By 2010, there were almost 10 times fewer people who graduated from secondary school. And those who graduated from high school from 19. 55 increased to 32. 13. The same indicator of the university pleases, as it has become much larger and there are also more educated people. You can also see that the master's qualification has the biggest changes, since in 2000 it had a good score of 25. 77 but by 2010 it had converged to a minimum. So you can understand that people in 2010 didn’t have a master's degree

The illustration gives information about the highest level of adult education in Singapore for 10 years.

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