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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

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The table provides information about the underground railline systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles from 1863 to 2001. Overall, it can be seen that London was the first railway with high kilometres, while Kyoto has lowest kilometres throughout the period. To begin with, in case of London railway was established in the year 1863 whereas it has 775 millions passenger per year with the route of 394 kilometres. Likewise, Tokyo metro had added in the year 1927 with the 155 kilometres of route but it has highest client over the period around 1930 millions. In addition, Washington DC has 126 route with around 144 commuter in the year 1976. Furthermore, in terms of Kyoto and Los Angeles which metro line were started in 1981 and 2001 have a similar traveller around 45 millions and 50 millions respectively.
The table provides information about the underground
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systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles from 1863 to 2001.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that London was the
first
railway with high
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kilometres
, while Kyoto has
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lowest
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kilometres
throughout the period.

To
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begin
with, in case of London railway
was established
in the
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year
1863 whereas it has 775
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millions
passenger per
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year
with the route of 394
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kilometres
.
Likewise
, Tokyo metro had
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added
in the
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year
1927 with the 155
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kilometres
of route
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but
it has
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highest
client over the period around 1930
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millions
.
In addition
, Washington DC has 126 route with around 144
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commuter
in the
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year
1976.

Furthermore
, in terms of Kyoto and Los Angeles which metro line were
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started
in 1981 and 2001 have a similar
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traveller
around 45
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millions
and 50
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millions
respectively
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

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