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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. O7gN

The table provides information about the underground railline systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles from 1863 to 2001. Overall, it can be seen that London was the first railway with high kilometres, while Kyoto has lowest kilometres throughout the period. To begin with, in case of London railway was established in the year 1863 whereas it has 775 millions passenger per year with the route of 394 kilometres. Likewise, Tokyo metro had added in the year 1927 with the 155 kilometres of route but it has highest client over the period around 1930 millions. In addition, Washington DC has 126 route with around 144 commuter in the year 1976. Furthermore, in terms of Kyoto and Los Angeles which metro line were started in 1981 and 2001 have a similar traveller around 45 millions and 50 millions respectively.

The table provides information about the underground Possible spelling mistake found.rail line
railline
 systems in London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto and Los Angeles from 1863 to 2001.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that London was the first
 railway with high Possible spelling mistake. 'kilometres' is British English.kilometers
kilometres
, while Kyoto has A determiner is probably missing here: "the lowest".the lowest
lowest
Possible spelling mistake. 'kilometres' is British English.kilometers
kilometres
 throughout the period.

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begin
 with, in case of London railway was established
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1863 whereas it has 775 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 passenger per You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 with the route of 394 Possible spelling mistake. 'kilometres' is British English.kilometers
kilometres
. Likewise
, Tokyo metro had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1927 with the 155 Possible spelling mistake. 'kilometres' is British English.kilometers
kilometres
 of route This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it has A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".the highest
highest
 client over the period around 1930 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
. In addition
, Washington DC has 126 route with around 144 Possible agreement error. The noun 'commuter' seems to be countable, so consider using: "commuters".commuters
commuter
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 1976.

Furthermore
, in terms of Kyoto and Los Angeles which metro line were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 in 1981 and 2001 have a similar Possible spelling mistake found.travelertravelled
traveller
 around 45 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
 and 50 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthousandtrillionmuchlottotalsum
millions
respectively
. 