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The diagram below shows how the leather goods are produced.

The diagram below shows how the leather goods are produced. 6bdW

The process diagram illustrates the method how leather materials are produced in factories. Overall, the figure consists eleven stages, beginning with animal skin and end up with products. To begin with, at first stages animal skin were dried and passed through vehicles to factory. Likewise, the parts are washed with the helps of water and lime. Secondly, the lime are soaked after that, it has been flattening into machine. At the middle stages, the skin are soaked by water and vegetable matter. Moreover, it is polished by machine for several minutes. In addition, in last stages, the polished skin has been transfered into truck then it took for manufacture companies to make shape and size. Finally, the leather product are ready as shown in figure.

The process diagram illustrates the method how leather materials are produced
 in factories.

Overall
, the figure consists eleven You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
, beginning with animal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
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end
 up with products.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, at first
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stages
 animal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
were dried
 and passed through vehicles to factory. Likewise
, the parts are washed
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 of water and lime. Secondly
, the lime are soaked
 after that, it has been flattening into machine. At the middle You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
are soaked
 by water and vegetable matter. Moreover
, it is polished
 by machine for several minutes.

In addition
, in last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstandinglegpointstepmomentphase
stages
, the polished You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurcoatingcrustsurfacejackethusk
skin
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transfered
 into truck then it took for manufacture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 shape and size. Finally
, the leather product are ready as shown in figure. 