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The graph gives information about Dubai Gold Sales in 2002

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The line graph demonstrates the Dubai Gold Sales in the period of one year and are measured by millions of dirhams. Overall,   the most significant facts to emerge from the graph are that there was the most amount of sales in March and it decreased over the time. At the beginning,   sale started with 200 dirhams in January and reached a peak of about 300 dirhams in March. Then, it declined quickly accounting for a slight more than 200 dirhams in April.   From April, the amount of sales decreased gradually in the following months and rose to 200 dirhams in August. However,   there was again a decline in September,   and sales stood at 100 dirhams.   From October to December,   the amount of sales fluctuated and the last one made up about 200 dirhams in December.
The line graph demonstrates the Dubai Gold
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in the period of one year and
are measured
by millions of
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dirhams
.

Overall
,
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the most significant facts to emerge from the graph are that there was the most amount of
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sales
in March and it decreased over the time.

At the beginning,
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sale
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started
with 200
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dirhams
in January and reached a peak of about 300
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dirhams
in March. Then, it declined
quickly
accounting for a slight more than 200
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dirhams
in April.
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From April, the amount of
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sales
decreased
gradually
in the following months and rose to 200
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dirhams
in August.

However
,
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there was again a decline in September,
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and
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sales
stood at 100
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dirhams
.
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From October to December,
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the amount of
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sales
fluctuated and the last one made up about 200
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dirhams
in December.
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