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The diagrams depict the steps and materials involved in the cement manufacturing process as well as how cement is used to make concrete for construction.

The diagrams depict the steps and materials involved in the cement manufacturing process as well as how cement is used to make concrete for construction. e5Km7
The diagrams depict the steps and materials involved in the cement manufacturing process as well as how cement is used to make concrete for construction. Overall, beginning with the input of raw materials and finishing with bags of the finished product, there are obviously five stages in the manufacture of cement. Four different materials are blended together to make concrete. In detail, limestone and clay are crushed to form a powder in the first phase of cement production. After that, the powder is mixed before ever being fed into a revolving furnace. The resulting mixture is ground and cement is formed after it has already been warmed. The cement is then bundled in huge bags. Cement, along with dirt, sand, and water, is one of the four raw materials used in the manufacture of concrete. Concrete is made up of 50 percent dirt, 25 percent sand, 15 percent cement, and 10% water, to be precise. In a circular system known as a concrete mixer, the four products are mixed together.
The diagrams depict the steps and
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materials
involved in the
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cement
manufacturing process
as well
as how
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cement
is
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used
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make
concrete for construction.

Overall
, beginning with the input of raw
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materials
and finishing with bags of the finished product, there are
obviously
five stages in the manufacture of
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cement
. Four
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different
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materials
are blended
together to
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make
concrete.

In detail, limestone and clay
are crushed
to form a powder in the
first
phase of
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cement
production. After that, the powder
is mixed
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before
ever
being fed
into a revolving furnace. The resulting mixture
is ground
and
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cement
is formed
after it has already
been warmed
. The
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cement
is then bundled in huge bags.
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Cement
, along with dirt, sand, and water, is one of the four raw
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materials
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
in the manufacture of concrete. Concrete
is made
up of 50 percent dirt, 25 percent sand, 15 percent
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cement
, and 10% water, to be precise. In a circular system known as a concrete mixer, the four products
are mixed
together.
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IELTS academic The diagrams depict the steps and materials involved in the cement manufacturing process as well as how cement is used to make concrete for construction.

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