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The graph shows changes in the number of London underground Station passengers in one day

The graph shows changes in the number of London underground Station passengers in one day BJaN5
The line graph gives information about changes of the number of London  Subway station passengers  in a single day from 6 am to 22. 00 pm. Overall, it can be seen that most people get to the station at 8: 00 wheras the least number of people get at 16: 00. At 06: 00 in the morning 100 people get to the London Subway Station and its number increases gradually until it reaches a peak of 400 people at 08: 00.   From 08: 00 to 10: 00 numbers decrease gradually and from 10: 00 to 12: 00 it increases again until they remain constant at 12: 00, 13: 00 and 14: 00 with about 300 passengers. There is a huge decline at 16: 00 with only 100 people getting to the Station.   However,   from that time to 18: 00 the number of people goes up dramatically with 200 passengers at 17: 00 and 300 passengers at 18: 00. In the evenings and at nights  there is a less number of people going to the Subway.
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Subway
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passengers
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in a single day from 6 am to 22. 00 pm.

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to the
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station
at 8: 00
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at 16: 00.

At 06: 00 in the morning 100
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to the London Subway
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Station
and its
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increases
gradually
until it reaches a peak of 400
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at 08: 00.
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From 08: 00 to 10: 00
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decrease
gradually
and from 10: 00 to 12: 00 it increases again until they remain constant at 12: 00, 13: 00 and 14: 00 with about 300 passengers.

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getting to the
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from that time to 18: 00 the
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of
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goes up
dramatically
with 200 passengers at 17: 00 and 300 passengers at 18: 00. In the evenings and at nights
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there is a less
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of
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going to the Subway.

IELTS academic The graph shows changes in the number of London underground Station passengers in one day

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