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From 1995 to 2000, the bar chart depicts travelers to three major airports John F, Kennedy, LaGuardia, and Newark in New York.

From 1995 to 2000, the bar chart depicts travelers to three major airports John F, Kennedy, LaGuardia, and Newark in New York. 15ngA

From 1995 to 2000, the bar chart depicts travelers to three major airports John F, Kennedy, LaGuardia, and Newark in New York. Overall, it is clear that one of the three airports, LaGuardia, sees a substantial increase in passenger numbers every year, with the exception of 1997. In detail, LaGuardia airport registered nearly 70, 000, 000 passengers in 2000, the most of any of the three airports, a 20, 000, 000 increase from the previous year. Except in 1997, John F. Kennedy (JFK) airport received the second highest number of visitors over a six-year period (a near 50, 000, 000 visitors). The number of tourists fell marginally between 1997 and 1999, but by 2000, it had risen to 45, 000, 000. Meanwhile, Newark airport saw a gradual rise of 10, 000, 000 passengers per year from 1995 to 1997, and then it peaked at 40, 000, 000 for three years in a row from 1998 to 2000.

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 from 1995 to 1997, and then it peaked at 40, 000, 000 for three years in a row from 1998 to 2000. 