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The graph displays the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island between the time period 2010 to 2017.

The graph displays the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island between the time period 2010 to 2017. E7eDM
The graph displays the number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island between the time period 2010 to 2017. Overall, the graph of number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island, who stayed on cruise ships displays the opposite behaviour than the graph of visitors, who stayed on island and both graphs fluctuate during the whole time period. However, the total numbers of tourists visitors overall increased during the timeframe. Total number of visitors visiting a Caribbean island in 2010 were one million and they kept increasing from 2010 to 2015. In 2015 there were around 2. 7 million total tourists, then it remained a stady in time period 2015 to 2016. From 2016 to 2017, they increased dramatically to 3. 5 million total tourists. The number of visitors stayed on cruise ships were around 0. 3 million in 2010, then they rose to 0. 5 million in 2011. After that they decreased to below 0. 5 million in 2013. Then they again showed inclined behaviour in time period 2012 to 2017 and they became around 2 million in 2017. The number of visitors stayed on island were just above 0. 5 million in 2010, then they remained steady till 2011 and then rose to 1. 5 million in 2013. They reamined strady again for time period 2013 to 2015. After that they declined to just above 1 million in 2016 and then they increased to around 1. 5 million in 2017.
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displays the
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number
of
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tourists
visiting a Caribbean
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island
between the
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time
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period
2010 to 2017.
Overall
, the
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of
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number
of
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tourists
visiting a Caribbean
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island
, who
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stayed
on cruise ships displays the opposite
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behaviour
than the
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graph
of
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visitors
, who
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stayed
on
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island
and both
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graphs
fluctuate during the whole
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time
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period
.
However
, the total
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numbers
of
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tourists
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visitors
overall
increased during the timeframe.

Total
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number
of
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visitors
visiting a Caribbean
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island
in 2010 were one
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million and
they
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increasing from 2010 to 2015. In 2015 there were
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2. 7
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total
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tourists
, then it remained a
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stady
in
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2015 to 2016. From 2016 to 2017, they increased
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million
total tourists.

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number
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visitors
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stayed
on cruise ships were
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million
in 2010, then they rose to 0. 5
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million
in 2011.
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that they decreased to below 0. 5
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million
in 2013. Then they again
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showed
inclined
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behaviour
in
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2012 to
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2017 and
they became
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around
2
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million
in 2017.

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number
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visitors
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million
in 2010, then they remained steady till 2011 and then rose to 1. 5
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in 2013. They
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reamined
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strady
again for
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2013 to 2015. After that they declined to
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2016 and
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in 2017.
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