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Pie chart of online sales in Canada in 2005 and 2010

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The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of online sales for four retail sectors in Canada in the years 2005 and 2010 respectively. Overall, the significant sectors are “Electronics and Appliances” and “Food and Beverage”, which accounted for over half the online sales in both the years. “Home Furnishings” had the most downfall while “Videos Games” attained profits over the years. Electronics and Appliance sales were 35 percent in the year 2005. Moreover, it experienced a marginal change of -5% and came to 30% by the year 2010. Food and Beverage rose tremendously from 22% to just under one-third of the sales. On the other hand, Home Furnishings had a drastic decrease over the years from a quarter to a small minority of 15%. In contrast to this, Video Games sales grew dramatically from 18% to almost a quarter.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of online
sales
for four retail sectors in Canada in the years 2005 and 2010
respectively
.

Overall
, the significant sectors are “Electronics and Appliances” and “Food and Beverage”, which accounted for over half the online
sales
in both the years. “Home Furnishings” had the most downfall while “Videos Games” attained profits over the years.

Electronics and Appliance
sales
were 35 percent in the
year
2005.
Moreover
, it experienced a marginal
change
of -5% and came to 30% by the
year
2010. Food and Beverage rose
tremendously
from 22% to
just
under one-third of the sales.

On the other hand
, Home Furnishings had a drastic decrease over the years from a quarter to a
small
minority of 15%.
In contrast
to this, Video Games
sales
grew
dramatically
from 18% to almost a quarter.
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