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line graph food consumption australian teenagers

line graph food consumption australian teenagers n18PE

The line graph illustrates the changes in the consumption of 3 fast foods by Australian teenagers over the period of 25 years from 1975 to 2000. Units are measured by the number of times a particular fast food is eaten in a span of 1 year. Overall, it can be observed that “pizza” and “hamburgers” intake increased like a rocket while “fish and chips” declined. In 1975, “fish and chips” was the most preferred food by the teenagers. However, at the end of 2000, hamburgers remained as the most consumed fast food. Hamburgers started with around 10 units and later attained 100 units in the year 1995. It remained constant till 2000. Just like “hamburger” is “pizza”, which started around 5 units, attained peak with 85 and remained constant in the time period of 1995-2000. On the other hand is the “fish and chips” which plunged over the time period. It had fluctuations in the years 1980 and 1985. Moreover, the units consumed were reduced to less than a half(100 to 40) when it reached 2000.

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teenagers
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 by the number of times a particular This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
fast
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 in a span of 1 year.

Overall
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 that “pizza” and “hamburgers” intake increased like a rocket while “fish and chips” declined. In 1975, “fish and chips” was the most preferred food by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
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 of 2000, hamburgers remained as the most consumed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:quickrapidswiftprompt
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started
 with around 10 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
 and later attained 100 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
 in the year 1995. It remained constant till 2000. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
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 like “hamburger” is “pizza”, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 around 5 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrewgroupsystementity
units
, attained peak with 85 and remained constant in the time period of 1995-2000.

On the other hand
 is the “fish and chips” which plunged over the time period. It had fluctuations in the years 1980 and 1985. Moreover
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units
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reduced
 to less than a half(100 to 40) when it reached 2000. 