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Number of internet years, from 1998 to 2013

Number of internet years, from 1998 to 2013 96307

The bar graph shows the number of internet users in Greece, Denmark, Canada, and World average from 1998 to 2013. Overall, it is clear that the number of users in Denmark and Canada are higher than others. In contrast, Greece is ewer than and close to World average. Yet, it has been increased gradually during 15 years. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the number of internet users in Denmark roughly quadruple from 1998 to 2013. In 1998, Canada was the highest, but Denmark become the highest number of users from 2003. Similarly, Canada had been grown up steadily during 15 years. Although, growth users treble from 1998 to 2013. Also, Greece gained about 20, 000 users every 5 years. The gap between 3 countries had widened at the end of the period whereas World average had been ascended continually

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