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Number of internet years, from 1998 to 2013

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The bar graph shows the number of internet users in Greece, Denmark, Canada, and World average from 1998 to 2013. Overall, it is clear that the number of users in Denmark and Canada are higher than others. In contrast, Greece is ewer than and close to World average. Yet, it has been increased gradually during 15 years. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the number of internet users in Denmark roughly quadruple from 1998 to 2013. In 1998, Canada was the highest, but Denmark become the highest number of users from 2003. Similarly, Canada had been grown up steadily during 15 years. Although, growth users treble from 1998 to 2013. Also, Greece gained about 20, 000 users every 5 years. The gap between 3 countries had widened at the end of the period whereas World average had been ascended continually
The bar graph
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in Greece, Denmark, Canada, and World average from 1998 to 2013.
Overall
, it is
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clear
that the
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number
of
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users
in Denmark and Canada are higher than others.
In contrast
, Greece is ewer than and close to World average.
Yet
, it has
been increased
gradually
during 15 years. Looking at the graph more
closely
, one can
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see
that the
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of internet
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users
in Denmark roughly quadruple from 1998 to 2013. In 1998, Canada was the highest,
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Denmark become the highest
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of
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users
from 2003.
Similarly
, Canada had
been grown
up
steadily
during 15 years.
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Although
, growth
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users
treble from 1998 to 2013.
Also
, Greece gained about 20, 000
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users
every 5 years. The gap between 3 countries had widened at the
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end
of the period whereas World average had
been ascended
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continually
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