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The graph displays the number of multinational visitors come to give nations, containing Brazil,Egypt,Malaysia,France and the USA between 1995 and 2000

The graph displays the number of multinational visitors come to give nations, containing Brazil, Egypt, Malaysia, France and the USA between 1995 and 2000 d3kEE

In general, it is remarkable that the USA and France were the most popular countries during this period and the number of tourists in most nations rose over time. In 1995, the USA was ranked the first with 70 million visitors and France was in second place with 30 million. Over the period from 2000 to 2005, France experienced a dramatic upward trend with more than 60 million international tourists while the figure of the USA increased slowly. The result was the in 2010, both countries had a same quantity of multinational visitors at about 90 million each. The number of tourists visiting Malaysia improved steadily from 1995 to 2010 but still lightly under 50 million. Both Brazil and Egypt were visited by nearly 10 million visitors at the start of the period. However, over a ten-year period between 2000 and 2010, Egypt saw such a better growth than Brazil, about 20 million and 15 million respectively.

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